Saturday, October 25, 2014

Commas Make a Difference


I start this lesson off by making a huge deal about the fact that commas can save lives. I use the classic example, "Let's eat, Grandma! / Let's eat Grandma!" I even act this out. The kids love it! I even got parent volunteers this year telling me kids were declaring this and acting it out at dinner! :)

After reading the mentor text, "Eats, Shoots and Leaves," students create their own sentences with  and without commas showing particularly how a comma can change the meaning of a sentence that is directly addressing someone. The kids giggle non-stop throughout this lesson and beg to do more. See some of their work below!
Student Work Sample

Student Work Sample

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Mentor Text

Student Work Sample

Student Work Sample



Thursday, October 16, 2014

Comma Exploration Activity

Background
I tried something new this year, and I am so excited to share this activity with you! First, you need to know the background students were given before completing this activity. This activity was designed for intermediate students, particularly fifth graders. Using the text, Mechanically Inclined, I provided students with background on basic sentence structure (subjects/predicates) in addition to different types of sentences (simple, compound, and complex). Mechanically Inclined provides visuals and great scaffolds for students to help them understand independent and dependent clauses. My favorite is teaching them AAAWWWUBBIS (yes, we howl this) words which start dependent clauses at the beginning of sentences. Additionally, I teach the students a "Coordinating Conjunction Dance" to the tune of "Jump on it". They shake their hips and say a conjunction to each beat of the song. "But, or, nor, for, so, yet, and - conjunction! conjunction! conjunction!" Boy oh boy - do they remember coordinating and subordinating conjunctions now thanks to this! Anything to make it fun and memorable! To wrap it up, you may want to be sure students can identify and create all three types of sentences before this activity. 

Activity
I planned 6 stations to address 6 different comma rules - Dates, listing, compound sentences, complex sentences, dialogue, and appositives. I found 1-3 mentor texts and bookmarked different places in the text students should read and analyze. In groups of three, they had to form a generalization about that particular comma rule and record it on their handout. They were given 2-3 minutes at each station. Afterwards, we collaborated as a class. Finally, students were given the comma rule handout below, and we matched our generalizations to the notes. As you can see, there are 9 below, so this activity didn't address all of them due to time constraints. Students will be taught these in isolation, but you can easily add them into stations as well. 

Purpose
It is imperative that students use a variety of sentences in their writing. I encourage them to use more complex and compound sentences in their writing. In addition, Common Core now expects students to have knowledge of sentence structure and a greater awareness of mechanics. After thorough review and application, students will take a culminating test on comma rules. See my TPT store for this worthwhile resource! Get Comma Test Here!




Sharing our thinking as we form our generalizations together. 

What generalization can you make about how this comma is used? 

Sample student response 


Comma Rules
1.    List nouns and adjectives.
a.     The hairy, scary monster jumped out from under my bed.
b.     I would like relish, mustard, and ketchup on my hot dog, please.
2.    Dates – in between number and year
a.     October 31, 2013
3.    Used to separate dialogue from the rest of the text.
a.     My mom exclaimed, “Wow! You look great!”
4.    Used to add words or a phrase that gives more information about the subject.
a.     My dog, Bailey, was adopted from a shelter.
b.     The man, whose name we shall not mention, is going to prison.
5.    Used to offset “Yes” or “No”.
a.     Yes, I would have to say I was very scared.
6.    Used after an introductory word
a.     Finally, we left.
b.     Next, mix your ingredients together.
7.    Direct Address
a.     Brandi, would you like some pizza?
b.     I love your hair, Drew.
 Before a coordinating conjunction joining two sentences together.
a.   but, or, nor, for, so, yet, and
b.     I am tired, but I am still going to stay up to watch The Walking Dead.
9.    After a subordinating conjunction is used at the beginning of a sentence.
a.   After, although, as, as if, as long as, although, because, before, if, in order that, provided that, since, so, so that, though, till, unless, until, when where, whereas, while
b.     Although I am a fan of hamburgers, I do not enjoy eating them from McDonald’s.
c.     As long as you do your homework, you can play outside.